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名师解析2018年考研英语一大作文


  52.Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the picture below. In your essay, you should

  1)describe the picture briefly

  2)interpret the meaning, and

  3)give your comments.

  Write your answer neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.(20 points)

  【布局谋篇】

  一个男孩正在选课,如何选择?有些课程知识新、重创新、有难度;有些课程给分高、易通过、作业少。显然命题人想表达的主题是:大学生,祖国的花朵和未来,应该多选择知识新、重创新、有难度的课程,这些课程就是适合自己的正确选择,这有助于提高大家的能力,从而更好地为社会做贡献!因此,文章可以如下布局。第一段,简要描述图片,引入主题。第二段,重点分析如何选择,选择知识新、重创新、有难度的课程的好处(知识新、重创新和有难度三个维度的好处都要重点分析,只分析创新的优点,或者迎难而上不算跑题,但是不够全面)。第三段,总结自己的观点(大学生要做出正确的选择并且要为之努力)加上呼吁即可。

  【参考范文】

  How concise but thought-provoking the picture is! What is clearly depicted in the picture is that a boy,sitting in front of a computer, is selecting courses through the system of selecting courses, who takes a considerable number of factors into consideration ,which include the emphasis of innovation, the updating of knowledge and the level of difficulty as well as the scoring, the qualified rate and burden of assignment. Apparently,it is how to make the best courses for college students that is what the author intends to convey to us.

  It is not uncommon to find that with the development of society and economy,the competition is becoming increasingly intense and the updating of knowledge is getting quicker and quicker.Though some courses are easy to learn and get high scores ,it may be out of date.In addition,it has been universally acknowledged that the awareness of innovation will not only be beneficial to our personal growth and success but also contribute to the development and progress of society and economy,which is the most essential qualification that anyone who wants to achieve success should possess.Consequently,the courses stressing innovation should be chosen.Furthermore, the way to success is full of obstacles and hardships. Anyone who is eager to get successful must realize that there is no shortcut to success at all because all achievements come from laborious trial and effort. Accordingly ,young students are supposed to choose some courses with great difficulties to improve their abilities.

  After what we have discussed above,we can reasonably come to the conclusion that whatever the prospect is,however difficult the situation is,we,young students, should have the courage to face difficulties,be willing to absorb new knowledge and cultivate the consciousness of innovation.I am strongly convinced that only by doing so,can our promising future be guaranteed.

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