亮点句式:
1 Based upon the data offered, we can see that-> Based upon the data offered, what we cannot fail to see is that...
注释:what we cannot fail to see is that 是we can see that 的高级表达。“依据所提供的数据,我们可以看到...”
2 Meanwhile, the percentages of going for further education ->Meanwhile, it is pronounced that the percentages of going for further education
注释:It is pronounced that...是万能句首扩充,表示:“显而易见的是,...”
3 we may notice that...also plays an important role in leading to this phenomenon. “我们也许会注意到......在导致这个现象中起着重要的作用。”
写作模板:
首段描图:What is illustrated in the pie chart demonstrates that obvious differences have occurred in respect of 主题(名词短语). Based upon the data offered, what we cannot fail to see is that XXX accounts for the largest proportion, which is/are 数值 . Meanwhile, it is pronounced that the percentages of 对比对象 1,2,3 are 数值1,2,3 respectively.
“上述饼状图清楚展现了......上的鲜明不同。根据所提供的数据,我们可以看到,......占了最大比例,为......,而对比对象1、对比对象2、对比对象3分别占了数据1, 数据2 和数据3。图表中所反映的数据在当今社会中引起人们的反思并值得讨论。”
万能句型:
The contributing factors responsible for this phenomenon can be summarized as follows./It is no difficulty for us to come up with several possible reasons to account for this phenomenon.“原因如下:...”
There may be other factors contributing to this phenomenon, but I think what has been mentioned above is generally reasonable.
注释:此句型用于中间段原因分析的结束句。总结——“也许还有其他因素能解释这一现象,但我认为刚刚我说的基本是合理的。”
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